Author Interview: JCM Berne, author of “Wistful Ascending”

I’m a judge for the Self-Published Science Fiction Contest (SPSFC), and wanted to spotlight some of the authors in the contest. I loved JCM Berne’s Wistful Ascending (review here) and invited him on for an interview!

Author Interview: JCM Berne, Author of Wistful Ascending

My questions are in bold, with answers following.

What got you into writing speculative fiction?

First of all, speculative fiction is what I read. I find spec fiction empowering in a way the real world isn’t – a wizard or a starship captain (or a superhero) can impact the world in a way that a middle aged software developer finds quite difficult. I like those kind of stories, so that is what I read. When I read, I’m often very critical. I’ll find elements in a story I love, but other elements will take me out of the story, and then I search for a way to make my own thing that incorporates those parts that I loved while avoiding the pitfalls that annoyed me. That’s basically why I write: a love for parts of the genre crossed with a certain level of curmudgeonliness that makes me think I can do better.

That’s quite the origin story! I’m curious to know if there’s a specific book that led you to want to do better. I remember trying to write a couple sci-fi novels because I decided too much sci-fi had too many space battleships without any of them shooting at each other. I wasn’t well read, clearly, and haven’t gotten fiction published yet, either! Alas. What’s the elevator pitch for “Wistful Ascending?” What made you decide to combo space opera and superheroes?

No specific book got me interested in writing in general – maybe the Steven Brust Jhereg novels (he wrote fantasy crime fiction, and I wanted to do the same, but with a dwarf main character). That was back in the 90’s. The Hybrid Helix was sort of inspired by a very specific plot turn in the comic Invincible (now a cartoon on amazon) that I can’t really describe without spoiling that plotline. There are many other inspirations too; I keep finding elements of other stories I’ve read somewhere in the Hybrid Helix without having consciously putting them in. It’s a lot of theft from a lot of places!

The elevator pitch isn’t my strong suit; probably something like, “living weapon of mass destruction Rohan seeks a quiet life on a sentient space station trying to forget his past, but his past won’t forget him.” I really have a hard time marketing this book, finding comps for it, or describing its tone to people (you can tell by the number of reviews that start with ‘this book wasn’t what I expected’ – it’s incredibly common and, while nice, kind of annoying).

“Legends and Lattes but in space, with a side order of genocide.”

*Side-eyes my own review that talks about the unexpected combination of space opera and superheroes.* Yes, I’m sure it would get a bit old hearing the same thing every time! But it works so well! There are three books out in the series so far, and having read the first one, I’d say it works pretty well as a standalone with a ton of room to explore more stories. Does each book mostly wrap up its plot? How many books do you plan for the series?

Each book attempts to do the same thing – wrap up in a satisfying way while leaving room for more stories. I’ve gotten bad reviews, but nobody has complained about cliffhanger endings or unsatisfying resolutions. I do plan to write many more, and it’s possible I’d have some of them act as a trilogy, but that’s way farther down the road. And I’d be sure to explicitly tell people I’m doing that.

I jokingly tell people 25 books. I don’t know if that’s accurate, but that’s the ballpark I’m aiming for.

Awesome! I love that concept for a series because readers can know they aren’t going to get stuck with a cliffhanger without warning and wonder about a resolution until it comes. Obviously, the concept of space opera meets superhero brings all kinds of possibilities to mind. What challenges did using superpowers in space bring for you in writing? And, what’s your favorite superpower?

I seem to get that first question a lot, but superheroes and space have always gone together. Superman came to earth in a spaceship. Entire comic book series were taking place off earth since I was a kid – look at something like Jim Starlin’s Warlock series, for example (among many others).

The big challenge is trying to think of ramifications. If superpower X is possible, you kind of have to assume people have it, and that people have had it for a while. This assumption multiples with an interstellar setting – if there are many inhabited planets, there should be MANY people with whatever power or ability you come up with. How has that impacted history? If there is a balance of power, what maintains it? If there is constant warfare, why are there still people left alive?

That’s a big reason I don’t have real time travel or most kind of psychic powers. The biggest powers come with a cost, and defending against them has to be reasonably cheap. Otherwise the universe would be quite violent.

So the challenges for powers in space aren’t that different, just bigger in scale.

My favorite power is probably rapid healing. At my age the idea of waking up without pain is very appealing!

Thanks for the great interview! I think it gives readers a lot to look forward to–and extra reading. Where can readers find you?

I can be found at jcmberne.com, and on Amazon.

Thank you so much! I had fun with the questions!

Thank you!

“Exin Ex Machina” by G. S. Jennsen- An SPSFC2 Semifinalist Review

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Exin Ex Machina by G.S. Jennsen

Nika wakes up, her mind apparently psyche-wiped, she must forge her own identity even as the people around her have memories that stretch back generations. She quickly ends up in league with some kind of investigation team, looking into a series of crimes committed against people who are also psyche-wiped. Yet even as she searches for clues to stop the crimes, she has to evade or come to terms with who she used to be in the memories of others.

While it is a well-known and perhaps over-used trope to have memory loss in a main character, I personally don’t mind it so long as it makes sense in the plot. And for Exin Ex Machina, it decidedly makes sense not just for the plot but for the sake of the storytelling. The sheer bigness of the world, its different ideas, the way the humans-who-aren’t-quite-humans work would all be a bit overwhelming if Nika weren’t learning some of it herself along with the reader. The way the story is set up, it allows readers to ease into a well-crafted world with a steady diet of reveals, not just about the world but about Nika herself as a character.

The novel has many great ideas, but suffers somewhat from being a bit too sprawling for its plot. The very intensity and narrow scope focusing on Nika makes it difficult to pull away from the plot and see the bigger picture. Additionally, while the reveals were welcome and exciting when they came, they were a bit too far apart and drawn out to keep up the frenetic pace the story seemed to demand. The scope of the plot occasionally feels overwhelming, to the point where suspension of disbelief is required prolifically at times.

All of that said, though, Jennsen executes what is an ultimately satisfying tale with quit a bit going on. The world-building is there; the characters are well-executed, and the ideas are exciting.

Overall, Exin Ex Machina is a good read that definitely feels like part of a broader universe with plenty of storytelling potential. Fans of cyberpunk should definitely check it out.

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“The Emissary” by Michael J. Edwards

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The Emissary by Michael J. Edwards

On a post-climate change-ravaged Earth, an alien spaceship appears, suddenly upending the delicate balance that had been rebuilt only through dictatorial power in various regions of the planet. When the aliens prophesy doom for the planet and ask for Holly Burton, a woman who experienced quite a bit of tragedy, to be the emissary from Earth, the crap hits the fan.

There’s something to be said for how Edwards frames the doomsday scenario. Because Earth’s doom is 23 years away, it allows for all kinds of denialism and other strategies for coping with the doom than anything that’s helpful. Perhaps the most believable moment in the story is the part of a chapter focused on how humanity experienced a bunch of upheaval after the doomsday prophecy but then basically just settled into the same old routines. We can’t life in panic mode all the time, so people either stopped believing it would happen or resigned themselves to fate. Honestly, I kinda wish the book had been written about that whole time period, because it was some of the strongest part of the noel. As it stands, though, it only takes up a few pages, skating briefly across the fate of humankind before diving into how the aliens that came to Earth plan to help through use of the Emissary.

The trope of the “strong female character” looms large in this one. Holly Burton is the one who has to basically save humanity by being the emissary for her whole species to the aliens. Here, strength and independence for a woman is read as: comes on too strong, drinks herself too unreasoning foolhardiness, indulges herself in one night stands because they’re empowering, and even considers herself a bit of a b**ch [the actual word used in the book]. I honestly have so little patience for this trope, but I was hoping that we would see development of Holly to the point that we would outgrow it, but we don’t. In fact, about 2/3 of the way through the book, spurred on by an alien and nanite technology that allows her–without her knowledge or consent–to be in a dream that basically allows her and perhaps even guides her to engage in the drink-pick up a stranger-regret cycle that she was in near the beginning. It’s just… yuckier because it’s not even really her choice, maybe? The book doesn’t do a great job explaining exactly why or how it happens, but it leads to a judgmental conversation between Holly and the alien. The alien who used nanotech on her in nonconsensual ways to make the whole thing happen anyway.

The story occasionally touches on Earth, and when it does it’s got some… interesting takes. For example, early on readers discover that after climate change devastated the economies and agriculture of the planet, the recovery that’s still in progress has led to various enclaves being ruled exclusively by dictators. For whatever reason, it’s said as an aside as if it’s just obvious that only dictatorial power could exist in a post-pseudo-apocalyptic scenario. I was left wondering why, time and again, the governments were structured as they were. And when the aliens ask for the lead dictators from these various bastions of humanity, they willingly arrive, as if none of these dictators would be so paranoid as to assume that the whole alien thing was a ploy by a rival to lure them into the open. I was expecting an attack at any moment, and it didn’t occur. And maybe that’s good–because it played against my expectations–but it do so at the cost of my suspension of disbelief. I simply couldn’t get on board with the Earth working the way it did.

The Emissary has some good ideas in it, but in my opinion they are too wrapped up in tropes and unbelievable moments.

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“Debunked” by Dito Abbott- An SPSFC2 Semifinalist Review

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Debunked by Dito Abbott

Remember that opening scene from the movie “Up”? The one where they get super obsessed with a kind of pulpy exploration and it’s super fun and alternate history-y and great? Yeah, Debunked is a 400+ page book that is that, but with way more made scientists and fantastical creatures. Buckle up, you’re in for a ride.

Abbott mostly nails the tone needed to maintain the adventure. You can almost hear the radio-tuned voiceover reading the text as you go along. The story follows Alex and Ozzie, grandchildren of Sir Quidby Forsythe III, an infamous adventurer. Their grandfather has alienated much of the foremost adventuring society by being a debunker, dedicating his life to eliminating the unknown and fighting against the lethargy of other explorers to just write off the things they couldn’t explain. Unfortunately, he appears to have died and left Alex and Ozzie to clean up quite a few messes, including some apparent monsters and unknown lands.

Adventure is the name of the game throughout the whole book. Whether it’s an elderly woman with unexpected ninja skills, surprising creatures formerly unknown to science, or fighting against an ancient prophecy, the novel absolutely nails the campy fun it advertises. It’s Indiana Jones meets 1940s pulp sci-fi magazines, and it’s honestly great, most of the time. There’s a kind of everything-and-the-kitchen sink approach to storytelling here that you have to be ready for if you’re going to read it. Going along with that, because Abbott’s plotting forces him to navigate between the throw everything together and make an actual plot happen, the book starts to balloon in size. While it doesn’t quite overstay its welcome due to a deftness of plotting and madcap, it does get close. By the time the 200th plot element is introduced (maybe a slight exaggeration), as a reader I was thinking okay–let’s get this story wrapped up.

That said, though, the novel is overall a wild success. If you’ve got interest in steampunk, adventure novels, or pulp fiction, this is basically a must-read. While adventure novels aren’t necessarily my jam, this one did enough to scratch an itch I wasn’t really even aware that I had.

Debunked is a wild ride that serves up delight after delight. I found it a truly fun read, and would recommend it to folks who are up for a lengthy adventure.

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“Titan Hoppers” by Rob J. Hayes- An SPSFC2 Semifinalist Review

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Titan Hoppers by Rob J. Hayes

Progression fantasy is a rapidly growing field, especially in indie- and self- published books. The subgenre is defined basically by the driving plot centering around a character training, learning, and getting stronger throughout. Titan Hoppers is a science fantasy progression story that turns around the idea of huge Titans in space providing the resources for roving, lost groups of humans.

The core of the story involves Iro, who longs to do more for his people, finding out that he has a Talent that he was unaware of for his whole life. Because he has convinced himself he’s mostly useless to the Fleet, is bullied, and loses his sister in a traumatic way that leads him to blame himself, his progression starts of fairly slowly. He questions himself constantly, even as it is clear he has the skills and talent to do more than he does. Ultimately, scenarios are dropped on him which force him to progress beyond his self-imposed limits.

I found myself thinking that some aspects of the story were more interesting than others. For example, when the fleet of ships was searching desperately for a new Titan, I wanted to know more about how it came to be in that situation. Hints of what happened to humanity are dropped, but I thought the space opera aspects weren’t touched on as much as they could have been. Additionally, a lot of the story seemed to follow predictable tropes. Iro loses his sister, which leads him to lionize her; he’s born talentless (or at least perceived as such) and ends up with unique powers; the powers are triggered by his accidentally being thrust into combat for which he’s unprepared. These are all pretty standard fare for this subgenre–and indeed for sci-fi and fantasy more generally. The predictability of the plot made me lose interest at times. I kept hoping that we would find out more about the tantalizing questions on the borders of the story.

The action is well-done, however, and if you want to read what is essentially a lengthy dungeon crawl complete with a sense of leveling up and, er, progression, you’ve got it here in spades.

Titan Hoppers is a fun, action-packed romp that provides plenty of engagement for summer afternoon reading.

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“Lightblade” by Zamil Akhtar: An SPSFC2 Semifinalist Review

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Lightblade by Zamil Akhtar

Lightblade is a visceral read that builds on itself from the beginning. Readers are thrust into the viewpoint of Jyosh, a forced laborer who escapes to a dreamworld in which he trains to create a lightblade and destroy the powers that oppress him and his family. The story quickly builds from there, though, launching readers on an epic quest that keeps the pages churning throughout the whole of the book.

There’s quite a lot going on in the novel, which reads as part cyberpunk, part fantasy, and part Hunger Games or Red Rising level oppression. The early parts of the book provide a constant drip of information that wholly apart from the oppressive government that has forced Jyosh and others into labor camps to make weapons, there is something much bigger happening. Whether it’s the pamphlets dropped from the sky telling them there’s more to life than the oppressive regime or the questions about what is happening in Jyosh’s dreamworld that features strangely nuanced characters and scenes that shouldn’t exist, readers are drawn into a mystery that asks questions of the wider universe. When the book opens up that world later, the razor focus on Jyosh and the events surrounding him lends itself to a continued sense of mystery.

One problem with the novel is the world building occasionally feels a bit opaque. Readers are limited in their view of the world on purpose, but the book also reads as though Jyosh is hiding information. He suffers from some bouts of memory loss throughout the book, but this only increases the feeling of unsteadiness the world provides. Some of this may be purposeful–it’s clear there are much bigger things happening that may get revealed in the future–but it would have been nice to get a better sense of place in the novel. There’s rarely any description of locales in the “real world” beyond a few barebones descriptions. I’d have liked to know more about the world in which the story takes place.

Akhtar does a fabulous job of adding layers to the story as it goes on. What initially seems like a kind of North Korean prison camp story with the possibility of escape grows into a much bigger world. The limited perspective of Jyosh, while frustrating at times (see above) also keeps the story manageable, allowing readers to digest the plot as they move through the lengthy novel. The story ends at a cliffhanger of sorts without feeling entirely like a letdown or trap. I am anticipating the second novel.

Lightblade is an epic science fantasy read. It gave enough for me in the first book to be satisfied with where it ended, but left so many open questions that I am desperate for more. Recommended.

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“Earthship” by John Triptych- An SPSFC2 Semifinalist Review

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Earthship by John Triptych with Michel Lamontagne

When a rogue planet careens into the sun, the clock starts ticking on doomsday. Those who are first to react or have the most money are the ones who will determine the future of the planet.

Earthship has a great hook, even if it’s been done before in many different ways. Bam! A catastrophe strikes earth and we’re all doomed within a short time (here a decade) unless major changes are made. What do humans do with that? It’s the kind of story that begs for interaction and reflection. What would you do in that situation? Don’t think too hard about the fact that in this case it’s a rogue planet that does the “Bam!” and as far as stellar bodies go, its collision and the speed with which it happened seem totally impossible related to the laws of physics. This isn’t the kind of book to think too hard about.

The book suffers from a severe case of too many perspectives. Yes, apocalyptic scenarios like this beg for multiple perspectives. But there are just too many here. Rogue scientist who is somehow better than all her peers is one perspective, vengeful assassin is another, still another features a civil war in China, another (related to the first) has a family with a particularly crotchety old man, still another has a trillionaire and his son figuring out what to do with all their cash. The bouncing around is constant, and it makes for jerky reading as none of the plots really get a chance to get going early on, so by the time you’re about 20% into this lengthy novel, it still feels like you don’t know why all the characters matter or what they’re doing.

The problem isn’t helped by constant info dumps, many of which have seemingly no relevance for the plot. And, unfortunately, several of these seem to be put in for the explicit purpose of pushing an authorial point of view. Early on in the book, the uber-wealthy crypto magnate makes explicitly racist statements to his son [who calls him on it, but backs down when his dad threatens to cut him off of the wealth], commenting on how a specific people group only love him because they view him as a savior but they themselves aren’t capable of developing the tech needed to keep up. I initially thought this guy was supposed to be an unsympathetic character (and, to be fair, I’m still pretty sure he is), so his viewpoint isn’t taken as the authorial voice, necessarily. He goes on a rant about how only idiots believe in climate change, which the governments of the world clearly want you to believe in.

Later, though, a grandpa goes on an eerily similar rant, and he’s obviously supposed to be a sympathetic character. Climate change is nothing but the standard changes in temperature the Earth goes through, and the reason scientists agree that it’s human caused is because there’s just so much danged money being thrown at them to say so. This is patently absurd, of course, as not only would virtually anyone who knows any scientist anywhere realize that it’s not exactly the most lucrative profession (and certainly not one in which trillions of dollars are being thrown around to establish a global cabal of liars), but also the notion of a total global conspiracy in which virtually every scientist with any relevant degree agrees on something is the domain of self-deception or insanity. We as readers are supposed to believe that’s what’s happening–the global governments have all gone all in on a climate change myth–when the authors portray those same governments as willfully nuking each other, engaging in civil wars, and are incapable of doing anything about impending catastrophe even when it’s obviously right there. But no, don’t worry, despite all that they’re all 100% all in on making up climate change and paying scientists to lie about it!

This would all be a somewhat annoying aside except that it’s also united with two other things: the first is still other conspiracy-laden talking points (the progressives take over America, but it’s the Conservative Underground AKA Q [I’m not making this up] that stands up to them still; grandpa lost his tenure because he was accused of being racially insensitive for giving tests; etc.). This first point is annoying enough–a cornucopia of conservative conspiracy theories stewed together in the space of just a few pages–but the second problem makes it even worse. Not only is none of this actually relevant to the plot of the book, but the whole point regarding climate change being a conspiracy of biblical proportions is rendered utterly moot by the “actual” apocalypse happening right in front of their eyes! And of course, this appears to be an attempt at a not-so-subtle turnabout, but it fails utterly. Instead of being like, “Haha, you fools should have been listening to the nutjob scientists who denied climate change just like you should be listening to the person being portrayed as a nutjob for being right about the current apocalypse” the plot of the novel itself obviates against that by making it clear that action in the face of apocalypse–even one we can’t fully grasp or understand by implications–is the warranted and more reasonable way to do things! And none of these lengthy info dumps have any relevance to future plot! One example: the ham-fisted attempt to get “Q” written into the book by means of the “CU” above is literally not referenced directly ever again.

The overwhelming cast also makes it unclear who the villains are. One in particular gets an extremely brutal end, and I think we as readers are supposed to be cheering for their downfall, but the person who brings it about (or allows it to happen) isn’t terrible sympathetic themselves. I found myself just unconcernedly turning the page, mostly not caring at this point who lived or died because they’re all kind of annoying or have confusing enough plots that I didn’t care much about them.

By the time the Earthship itself finally gets underway–with some discussion about the positive and necessary practice of eugenics to ensure the best and brightest can be Earth’s future–I was disengaged. The novel is so bogged down by its morass of viewpoints that even the action-packed scenes start to feel like a slog. What’s one more shootout or one more look at civil war-torn China when Earth itself is being threatened? And that threat is only finally addressed in the last tiny portion of the book, a clear setup for a sequel.

Earthship had a fine beginning, but rapidly went downhill. It’s packed full of characters in an amorphous soup of motivations that becomes opaque and predictable by turns. In a crowded subgenre, I didn’t find it to be a standout read.

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“Wistful Ascending” by JCM Bearne- A superhero space opera!

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Wistful Ascending by JCM Berne

Wistful is an ancient, independent space station governed by an eponymous AI. On that station, Rohan is a half-human half-alien whose alien side has given him superhero powers. He works as a Tow Chief, Second Class for Wistful, flying about space and towing ships to dock with his bare hands. Berne takes us on a journey following Rohan as he has a couple extremely eventful weeks.

Rohan is not what he appears to be at first. He’s got secrets to hide, including a background that could make him a target for others. He strikes up a friendship with an alien kid on station, only to set off a relationship with the kid’s mom that gets Rohan in deep–possibly above his head. Meanwhile, he has to deal with towing ravaging space bears, a kaiju-infested planet, scientists who keep poking into things they possibly shouldn’t, and the Empire he left behind knocking at his door. Rohan’s a busy man.

What I’m most impressed by, to be honest, is how Berne juggles all these disparate plot threads and weaves them into a cohesive and supremely satisfying whole. During the first bit of the book, all the elements started to feel a tad piled on, but as the story continues, it becomes clear that each is a wholly realized and well-thought out point, bringing together a number of exciting stories all centered around our MC, Rohan. Indeed, apart from those plot points, a number of other side elements that at first seemed unimportant or simple window dressing became more interesting and developed as Berne reveals more of the world. One example that’s fairly spoiler-lite: most big ships have AIs on board them. While that might seem to most sci-fi readers as a fine aside, the importance of the AIs grows once readers discover the reason is tied to being able to push back against certain Powers in the universe. It’s not a major point in the book, but it is a great piece of world building that makes the whole thing seem more cohesive and interesting.

Now for the characters. Rohan: the guy grew on me. At first he seems not much more than a somewhat witty thread to keep the plot aligned, but he gets enough development and meat on his bones that by the end I was rooting for him, questioning his bad judgments, and hoping for the best for him. Berne does a great job doing this with several characters in the book, whether it’s the sassy alien security chief, the rampaging space bears, the alien woman with the antennae that Rohan is immediately attracted to, or the somewhat sardonic space station itself. Each has reasons for doing what they’re doing and a much deeper background than first meets the eye.

Looking back over this review, I feel I haven’t quite nailed the feeling of the story itself. This thing literally has football field sized kaiju on a death planet, a space station a la Babylon 5 wherein peoples come together on a neutral site for business or pleasure, superhero comic book action, space empires to deal with, and more! And it somehow all works! Go give it a try, because it’s great!

Wistful Ascending was a fantastic read. Berne deftly combines elements of superhero comic book-like action with the day-to-day activities of a space opera centered on an intriguing space station. I’m off to read the rest of the series, and I hope you’ll check them out, too!

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“A Space Girl from Earth” by Christina McMullen- An SPSFC Semifinalist Review

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A Space Girl From Earth by Christina McMullen

Ellie Whitmore is tall–six foot four–and covered with white spots that form a pattern across her skin [this made me think of the Trill from Star Trek]. When she finds out there’s more to her than she’s been told, she has to go on the run from forces seeking to exploit her.

The book starts off as a kind of standard privileged teen finds out not all is as it seems story. But it’s well enough told that it kept me engaged. What took me away from engagement was how many of the big reveals happened, starting around 15-20% into the book. At that point, there’s a lengthy conversation that takes place between multiple major characters and it’s basically just one big reveal about Ellie’s life and universe after another. It made it very difficult for me to follow and care about every major reveal when it’s so abrupt.

Like hey, everything we ever told you about who you are is totally wrong. Okay… Oh, and you don’t have internal organs that match a human in almost any way, which is why you had different developmental points than your human peers in school. Okay…… But no one really ever noticed much about that and it didn’t bother you and thankfully you were never badly injured enough for a doctor to have to be involved. Okay……… And it just goes on from there! There’s an evil empire out to get you because your skin contains secret information we could only store in that fashion and by the way there’s a hearthrob guy that you’re going to be in love with probably!

It’s all just dumped at once on the reader, and that really took me out of the story, to be honest. McMullen was able to bring me back in over time, though, with well-executed character pieces throughout and a decent, if predictable plot. Love interest(s) appear, and the book settles into a set of familiar themes that doesn’t blow you as a reader away but also is inoffensive. I would say, though, that the lack of detail with the setting, the lack of description of locales, and predictable nature of the plot remained low points for me.

A Space Girl From Earth shows potential. My own thoughts were that it could have done more with the big reveals rather than jamming them all together. McMullen makes interesting enough characters to engage readers enough to make the book worth a look.

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“Political Nightmare” by Rainbow Maccabre- An SPSFC Review

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Political Nightmare by Rainbow Maccabre

Have you ever read something and realized that whatever was going on, you didn’t know the context well enough to realize what it was? That is, in all honesty, how I felt listening to Political Nightmare by Rainbow Maccabre. Human-animal hybrids are everywhere from the beginning of this story. Why? It’s not entirely clear. That’s just how the world works. These hybrids with gender-bending narratives mash together in unpredictable ways, apparently all having to do with a plot against the empire/kingdom/nation.

When I was at Worldcon recently I went to a panel in which one of the panelists suggested to those who were not queer or anywhere on the LGBTQ+ spectrum to have the self-awareness when reviewing books that heavily featured experiences of people who are LGBTQ+ to admit when they don’t get it rather than giving a poor review. I don’t think this book deserves a poor review. I found it alternatively fascinating and disturbing. I didn’t understand. The book is like a screed, crying out against utter conformity by itself refusing to conform to anything. That includes expectations about construction of a world, of plot, and of characters.

Political Nightmare is intentionally disturbing, according to its authorial description. It’s not disturbing in a manner of disgust or anything; rather, it disturbs the mind by bending it and making you realize you’ve probably limited your perceptions of reality.

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